good and bad.

Good>so far we have edited the part 2 of the opening sequence.. it starts with zooming out of a ball ball on the christmas tree, then shows the christmas tree, and in the background is a cast of the shadow on thinck marroon curtains of the christmas tree. then there is a close up pan shot of the shelf, it slowly follows the clock and zooms into the picture. then it goes straight to the over the shoulder shot of the man cutting and placing a picture of twin girls in a locket and then placing that into a jewlerry box, then ripping up a picture of his wife and daughter. in the backgorund of the locket fixing scene there is clips of different props, for example clock ticking, necless broche and so on.. i feel this holds a good effect, because on that scene of this part of the title sequence the images are overlapping eachover..

Bad> one bad thing that i feel stood out quite alot that i think should be left how it is, but i think should be left and we will make up for it in the other part of the opening sequence.. is the shot of the grandad (over the shoulder shot) and i feel there should have been a little more effort on this shot, even though we did do well for the one chance we had to do it..